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I like it.

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its nice but it needs a lil bit of work in the second paragraph

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The opening sentence is awful. The rest of the first paragraph is pretty good.

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It's a great essay. but if I were you I would switch the place of the 1st and 2nd sentences. So it would say: The majority of the world is always thinking that high fashion and expensive materials are what make a girl pretty.Beauty and fashion are two completely different things.

Then tweak the 3rd sentence a lil so it makes sense-and don't start a sentence with "but" lol nah jk it's ok I think......

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I love it! I think it really describes your concern, interest, and mostly, your OPINION on these subjects! You really got into it near the end, and what's life if you have nothing to be excited and opinionated about? Great essay! Good luck and have a good life!

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Can I buy it it was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

How do you guys like this essay?! It's a little long, so it will be in a couple details, so it will fit.?

Wow. That goes on and on with a great message. I would say men short attention spans, so shorten it up!